Miniature Golf is one of my new favorites

I love my miniature golf story. It was so much fun to watch these guys just laugh with each other and see their reactions. I loved that I could have this vantage point that almost everyone can identify with. I even got a compliment for the lead from Zach, who edited the story, and Lakshna after I told her about how excited I was for it. The opening line was "The neon yellow, hot pink, and lavender purple balls could not be commanded to do their masters' bidding." It was really fun to play around with this piece after I met these guys. They were really humorous and easy going. I had a lot of fun even though I wasn't playing.